There are no rules in writing, just tools.
I'm very suspicious of the word 'style'. It's a word that people use to categorize things when they don't understand them.
"The hawk was everything I wanted to be: solitary, self-possessed, free from grief, and numb to the hurts of human life."
言语的力量可以搭建桥梁也可以烧毁它们;明智地选择吧。